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[Edited Version] Improvements of large and middle planets texture quality as well as rim, flare enhanced, asteroids edge have been smoothened, planet ring more blended in terms of color. I hope this is more satisfactory to you guys. I did not intend to make drastic changes but just improve it according to some of your remarks.


Hey, it's been a little while, working a lot! Lots of stuff coming up soon and this one first.
I wanted this space art quite dynamic and texturized with cool shapes, burning lights and mainly orange and blue-greenish colors.
All done in photoshop CS3.
All stocks and textures are mine.

Hope you'll enjoy it and get prepared for the oncoming :icontheluminarium: Exhibit! Very very soon guys...!
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:iconstefanhuerlemann:
Hey,
I really love this piece. And thats why I write this critique^^
First, the colours are marvellous. I really like this lensflare and the contrast from the light to the dark, gives a very "spacy" feel. Also the nebula. But there's also a big thing that bothers me about this piece and also some of your other pieces. The quality. The asteroids and the light around the lensflare have some "edges" in the light. I think you didn't save the file as JPG on 100 percent quality or something because I don't know how it could happen otherwise. Then the quality of the planets. The close-up planet looks good, I don't find anything lacking there. But the big planet and the planet with the ring have some quality problems. The quality of the big planet looks like you didn't use high enough resolutions for the texture. I don't know if you did but always use at least 4000x4000 px for a planet texture, the bigger, the better. The planet with the ring is the badest part in my opinion. I don't know but the quality seems so bad and also I don't like the lightning. Just try to do the same with the ringplant as with the little planet near the close-up. And I don't like the ring. Doesn't look as your level. There are a lot of great ring tutorials out there or you could ask *TixoL, his rings are the best^^

I hope I could help you ;)
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:iconvalentiniak:
ValentiniaK Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
blue and orange colorschemes I like
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!
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:iconmissblue23:
MissBlue23 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Looks like something from Mass Effect. Love it. Love everything you do
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!
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:iconnewyam:
newyam Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Man this looks amazing =) keep up the good work :thumbsup:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!! Glad you like it!
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:icontheladyassassin:
TheLadyAssassin Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
This is awesome! You're really doing fantastic on the space pieces! I love all of the ones you do! They are so fascinating!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much!! I'm about to upload my very last one!! Stay tuned he he!
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:iconsniper115a3:
Sniper115A3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011   Digital Artist
Very nice work!, love the colors 8-) The streak of the sun looks a bit too thick though... Great work :clap:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Yeah maybe just a bit too neat, I should have blurred them a little bit more!
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:iconqauz:
QAuZ Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2011
Featured [link]
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:iconfrenchfox:
frenchfox Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
:omg: Fascinating beauty ! :iconclapplz:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thx a lot mate!!
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:icongrattack:
Grattack Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional General Artist
Stunning image. Great composition and use of colour. Love it :)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Cheers mate! Glad you like it dude!
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:icongrattack:
Grattack Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional General Artist
No worries, its great image :)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thx!
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:iconerikshoemaker:
ErikShoemaker Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the update kicks ass mate ;) nice one!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thx Erik!! I really hope so!!
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:iconkimmie1987:
kimmie1987 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
Featured here: => [link] :iconcocoloveplz:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you very much!! :horns:
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:iconkimmie1987:
kimmie1987 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011
:aww:
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:iconthetimmaeh:
TheTimmaeh Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Student Artist
Sehr nice :D Bestes seit langem!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
danke! :horns:
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:iconnazo-the-unsolvable:
Nazo-The-Unsolvable Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't help but feel the blue atmosphere on the corner planet is distracting. It just seems out of place, in my opinion. Otherwise this is fantastic.
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thx! It was to add some more deepness to the picture, otherwise it would be too flat. Nevertheless I understand your feeling, indeed it could distract the focal yeah!
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:icontylercreatesworlds:
TylerCreatesWorlds Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Love the colors man, that nebula is too legit to quit.
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you mate!
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:icondalek200:
Dalek200 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
good to see some more work from you dude, awesome as always :) excellent work :clap:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you mate!! :horns:
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:icondalek200:
Dalek200 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011
:)
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:iconthe-prototype92:
The-Prototype92 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Now That's AWESOME :D Certainly A Fav. :D
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:iconcchomikk:
cchomikk Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
odd quality ;s maybe it's dA's fault
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
What do you mean dude ?
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:iconcchomikk:
cchomikk Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
sometimes images are a bit smoothy and not enough sharp, when uploaded on dA
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Alright yes indeed! I thought it would be the opposite lol!! I decided not to put HD version this time! Thx for your answer dude!
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:iconzinkai:
zinkai Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Beau boulot, impression paisible d'espace. Impressive !
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Merci pour ton com' c'est sympa !
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:iconroccenere:
RocCenere Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I would like a spaceship to go here please.


:3 absolutely beautiful.
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:iconmathieuberenguer:
MathieuBerenguer Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Elle est magnifique mec ;)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Merci beaucoup ! Content que ca te plaise yeah !!
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:iconzaec:
Zaec Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011   Photographer
Partage l'avis. :+fav:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
merci !!
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:iconplenoptic07:
Plenoptic07 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011
I can't wait for the Lum Exhibit!!!
This is glorious. Is it a supernova??
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks mate! Not really sure, I rather turned it into a blasting sun!
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:iconartistmef:
ArtistMEF Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
nebula is sexy, but you need to work more about the flare ( Knoll light factory adddon for the photoshop will be very helpfull) and with the planet light( very strong, and try to make it not so color burned, more smoothed)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Yeah, I know Kai pointed it out. I've edited the piece to correct that! Thanks mate I appreciate your help!
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:iconartistmef:
ArtistMEF Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
np, looks more nice now)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
:horns: Thx mate!! Hey the thing you're talking about for the flare is a photoshop plug-in??
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:iconartistmef:
ArtistMEF Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
yeah, for photoshop, also u can make nice flares in After effects
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