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Fracture by Shue13 Fracture by Shue13
[Edited Version] Improvements of large and middle planets texture quality as well as rim, flare enhanced, asteroids edge have been smoothened, planet ring more blended in terms of color. I hope this is more satisfactory to you guys. I did not intend to make drastic changes but just improve it according to some of your remarks.


Hey, it's been a little while, working a lot! Lots of stuff coming up soon and this one first.
I wanted this space art quite dynamic and texturized with cool shapes, burning lights and mainly orange and blue-greenish colors.
All done in photoshop CS3.
All stocks and textures are mine.

Hope you'll enjoy it and get prepared for the oncoming :icontheluminarium: Exhibit! Very very soon guys...!
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Hey,
I really love this piece. And thats why I write this critique^^
First, the colours are marvellous. I really like this lensflare and the contrast from the light to the dark, gives a very "spacy" feel. Also the nebula. But there's also a big thing that bothers me about this piece and also some of your other pieces. The quality. The asteroids and the light around the lensflare have some "edges" in the light. I think you didn't save the file as JPG on 100 percent quality or something because I don't know how it could happen otherwise. Then the quality of the planets. The close-up planet looks good, I don't find anything lacking there. But the big planet and the planet with the ring have some quality problems. The quality of the big planet looks like you didn't use high enough resolutions for the texture. I don't know if you did but always use at least 4000x4000 px for a planet texture, the bigger, the better. The planet with the ring is the badest part in my opinion. I don't know but the quality seems so bad and also I don't like the lightning. Just try to do the same with the ringplant as with the little planet near the close-up. And I don't like the ring. Doesn't look as your level. There are a lot of great ring tutorials out there or you could ask *TixoL, his rings are the best^^

I hope I could help you ;)
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XSereneiX Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
blue and orange colorschemes I like
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!
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MissBlue23 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Looks like something from Mass Effect. Love it. Love everything you do
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!!
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newyam Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011
Man this looks amazing =) keep up the good work :thumbsup:
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
thank you!! Glad you like it!
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TheLadyAssassin Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
This is awesome! You're really doing fantastic on the space pieces! I love all of the ones you do! They are so fascinating!
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you so much!! I'm about to upload my very last one!! Stay tuned he he!
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Sniper115A3 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011   Digital Artist
Very nice work!, love the colors 8-) The streak of the sun looks a bit too thick though... Great work :clap:
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you! Yeah maybe just a bit too neat, I should have blurred them a little bit more!
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