Fracture

Hey,
I really love this piece. And thats why I write this critique^^
First, the colours are marvellous. I really like this lensflare and the contrast from the light to the dark, gives a very "spacy" feel. Also the nebula. But there's also a big thing that bothers me about this piece and also some of your other pieces. The quality. The asteroids and the light around the lensflare have some "edges" in the light. I think you didn't save the file as JPG on 100 percent quality or something because I don't know how it could happen otherwise. Then the quality of the planets. The close-up planet looks good, I don't find anything lacking there. But the big planet and the planet with the ring have some quality problems. The quality of the big planet looks like you didn't use high enough resolutions for the texture. I don't know if you did but always use at least 4000x4000 px for a planet texture, the bigger, the better. The planet with the ring is the badest part in my opinion. I don't know but the quality seems so bad and also I don't like the lightning. Just try to do the same with the ringplant as with the little planet near the close-up. And I don't like the ring. Doesn't look as your level. There are a lot of great ring tutorials out there or you could ask *TixoL, his rings are the best^^

I hope I could help you <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)"/>