The perspective is well executed in this. The position of the spaceship brings the viewers attention to it. However, it would be nice to see some bridges in the background or some sort of obstruction since right now it feels like an empty square tunnel.
Basically think about silhouette against the background beyond the ship. Also, since you are portraying a concept of some sort of race, it would be nice to show one of the rival racers a little bit behind the one that we are focused on. Right now the concept looks more like someone is exploring an area than racing.
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