The perspective is well executed in this. The position of the spaceship brings the viewers attention to it. However, it would be nice to see some bridges in the background or some sort of obstruction since right now it feels like an empty square tunnel.
Basically think about silhouette against the background beyond the ship. Also, since you are portraying a concept of some sort of race, it would be nice to show one of the rival racers a little bit behind the one that we are focused on. Right now the concept looks more like someone is exploring an area than racing.
Hey thx for taking the time to listen, that's very cool!! You can find our entire album on itunes or deezer or even spotify. Just type 13digits The rise of souls, youll find us!! We have stuff on youtube as well. Thx a lot, really appreciated!!
Une image très bien réalisée et très dynamique, mais qui manque un peu son effet quand on la compare avec le titre, ça manque de concurrence pour donner l'idée de la course. C'est à peu près la seule critique que je peux faire
Hey thanks a lot man, so you're back fromthe US, How was it?? It must have been so awesome!! Thank you for the compliment, I'm working a lot my painting techniques to strengthen the whole thing!! Hope you're doing good?
yes, I'm great thanks. How have you been? The trip was awesome! Florida is like a dreamscape, with palms, wonderful super hot weather, the sun shining all the time, nice and friendly people, a beautiful countryside and impressive cities and beaches. Of course New York was fantastic, too. Quite overwhelming, busy and huge as it is. The view from one of the skyscrapers over the city is absolutely amazing, as is the view at the skyline at night. I have to go robbing a bank now, but the tour was definitely worth all the money I spent.
Awesome Erik, I lived this in LA and I can imagine how you felt mate. I felt like I was inside the TV, lol!! You must have shot a huge amount of pictures there, haven't you!! Lots of stocks for your next artworks, ah ah!! Hey mix almost done, you wont believe the sound we have in the end buddy!! It's almost finished, yahaaa!!
wow nice, when have you been to LA? Anyway, as some people told me LA and Miami are actually pretty similar when it comes to atmosphere and architecture. It was really amazing indeed, and I did take a lot of pictures but I'm not sure whether they are worth to be used as stocks, the quality and all could be better in some hehe.. I'm glad your cd is making progress!
I went in LA about 7 years ago, it was a month of total insane vacation!! I'll try to go in San Francisco with my wife maybe next year!! I'm sure you'll get some cool stocks in the end, buildings are always interesting ah ah!! Yeah, the cd is in good progress I'll send you over the new banner with your artwork. I think I'll pay you a tribute on dA with it to promote the album very soon mate!!