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"Transborder 2"
This is an iteration of a previous concept I did for this personal project called "Transborder 66" 
I really pushed it further and changed the ship design. 
Backstory: "Huge ships from mechanical nation called Transborders come regularly to collect captured humans, prisoners and rebels."
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Given 2017-11-08
Transborder2 by Shue13 ( Suggested by Catgirldstr11 and Featured by cosmicbound )
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Let's look at the positives on this piece:

The lighting is phenomenal here, and really drives home the entire 'Futuristic' appeal. The attention to detail on this work is also incredible. While I would request some more detail to the ship in the distance. However, it's understandable that both technical and physical limitations would have prevented this.

The way the light interacts with the fog and the ground below is also damn good. The specific artistic style and technique works incredibly well for this, although it could use some improvement in the landing area, as some parts of it look smudged and hastily drawn.



Now let's look at the negatives;

The main negative with this is Originality. While I hate to rate it poorly in this regard, it isn't exactly a new idea, what with the futuristic ship in the foreground landing in a dystopian environment.

I also have some minor issues with the rain, as I'm not entirely sure where it's coming from. It would appear that based on the lighting both on the robot and the ship, there wouldn't be an opening for the rain to fall through.


All in all, this is an amazing art piece and while it may not be original, it certainly does it better than most similar ideas.

9.5/10
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Lawrencej94 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That rain is incredible.
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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Ulysses-Nine Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
this needs to be in star citizen!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Wud be sick
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:iconkaleida0:
Kaleida0 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2017  New Deviant Student Digital Artist
This is incredible. I'm blown away by the intricacy and detail here. I wish I had more to say I'm genuinely speechless
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks a bunch
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:iconbreerothman:
breerothman Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
Stunning work <3
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks a lot Bree, really appreciated!!!
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:iconandreealupsanl:
AndreeaLupsaNL Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2017  Student Digital Artist
So cool
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank u
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:iconhalapande:
Halapande Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow, amazing imagination and skill; looks so real. :wow:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks
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Felixader Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2017
Can you define mechanical Nation?

Is it a Nation where everyone is a cyborg/robot/etc. or is it a heavily mechaniced nation as in uses an overabundance/is heavily reliant of/on technology, automation and industry?
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
I would say both, it's a fully cyborg nation which turned humans into slaves and colonyzed Earth to take mostly water as there main ressource to fuel there power.
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:iconradawolf:
radawolf Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
amazing!! :clap:
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank you
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:iconradawolf:
radawolf Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
a pleasure ^_^
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StormCatcher77 Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2017
Wow! This is 10 \ 10. Superb.
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconjasonjonre:
jasonjonre Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2017  Student Digital Artist
I see potential of a real movie/anime
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks, that would be sick!!
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:icongothold:
gothold Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2017
The misty atmosphere gives this a bleak, foreboding look.

excellently done.
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank you
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cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017
'Twas a dark and rainy night . . .'  This scene has the feel of a smuggler's operation.  So, what do the mecha do with the humans?  
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank you, they turn them into slave to labor the extraction of water.
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:iconcullyferg2010:
cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017
Why do the mecha need water?  To sell and/or trade?
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
To fuel their own nation, water replaced any type of oïl or other combustibles. Those mechas feeds themselves with water and cool down their mechanics.
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:iconcullyferg2010:
cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2017
So, they first use water as a coolant, then hydrolyze it into the separate hydrogen and oxygen for fuel? 
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
yes totally that!!
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:iconcullyferg2010:
cullyferg2010 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2017
Understood!
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LindArtz Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your much deserved DD!  Enjoy the limelight. :)
Congrats on DD By Marphilhearts by LindArtz
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Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
many thanks
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:iconzaco21:
zaco21 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017
Cool!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!
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BULLETPROOFCHEETAH Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017
Smoooth!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
cheers!
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:iconfynamic:
Fynamic Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017  New Deviant
This is an amazing work of art you did
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank you
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:iconmmmprod:
mmmprod Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow superb !!
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thx! :)
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:iconjalett:
jalett Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's relly cool! Amazing details and great concept. It makes me think about the Matrix Trilogy and you have captured something more. That feeling of open space, danger, robots, rainy day with great ships... You did an amazing job. Congratulations!!! :)
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank you, huge fan of Matrix!!
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:iconkalifooc:
kalifooc Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017
Tremendous style ..
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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:icontrealer:
trealer Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2017  New Deviant Hobbyist Digital Artist
loving the atmosphere
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thank u
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:iconsilvercleric:
SilverCleric Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2017  Student General Artist
Despite the nature of the ship... it looks pretty fierce. 
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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:iconfleja2003:
Fleja2003 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2017  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jawdroppingly - WOW
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:iconshue13:
Shue13 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2017  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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